by mermaid_girl
Wow! That's an awesome story line! Luv it! IT'S BEEN TO LONG FINISH THE STORY ALREADY
I don't know what else to say, for a romance this is amazing
it has depth of story, amazing characters, and leaves you wanting more
can't wait to read the next chapter!
please!!!!!!!!!!!! (with a cherry popped) ...lol can u finish the story? this is good.....
I last read this last year. i wish there was more! I was enjoying those two...
Finish this story! I am going nuts not knowing how it continues or ends!!!!
Your stories. This could not have been better! Please add another chapter? Would be GREATLY appreciated.
I can't help but wishing this were a book. You have me hooked on the story line and the development of the characters is fantastic. Please write more, soon.
amazing, i am in love with this story, please PLEASE keep it going. great job.
This story is very hot and interesting. Manolito sounds yummy!!! Please continue this story.
I sure hope that there is another chapter to this story. It could be the ending of the story or just more of the story, just don't leave me hanging. I am involved and need to see the story to the end. In other words, you are a very good writer and I enjoy the story very much. So please continue the story. Thanks
I'm still sitting at the edge of my seat...panting. This is one hot story. I love the plot and the characters (well except for Alono of course). I can't wait to see what happens next. I love all of your stories! Please don't make wait long for this one or Gentle Cowboy. They are fantastic!
I was going to check if the next chapter of Rainey's Song was going up, and i stumbled upon yours/ I must say I'm very impressed! Update ASAP!!! :D
this story updated but felt it jumped a few steps too many. Liked the little brother and the hpt passion between Mano and Clara.
I am SO glad to see an update of this story! I like the way things are going, but they seem to be moving a bit fast (like how would Clara know that Manolito seems more open with her than with his brother or - other people - when the two of them just met and BARELY had a whole conversation?). Other than that, thanks for the update and I look forward to seeing more!