by SAbitch
She needs to stop doing her drugs, it hurts her more then she's already is! And she need some loving time with Dr. Ashley ;)
Love it! Hope the next one comes soon! And I agree she needs to slow down with all the drugs but I think she should give Alice a chance the girl has been in love with her forever! Although I would like to see something to happen with the doctor :)
nicely written,even with flashbacks.tnx hoping for the nxt chapter soon.(cinder)
The story is building up nicely n I luv Nat bt damn those drugs wil destroy her, she needs help from Dr. Ash!!!
Man , you gat me hook ! That was abosoluty amazing ! Please , part 3 . Soon :)
Keep going wish she would give Alice a chance but that's wishful
Thinking so that's it wonderful
with what nat went through its very painful way beyond you can imagine.yet what i am anticipating now is the fact on how nat and ash get hooked with each other...to SABITCH a salute for your writing hope to read the sizzling next chapter soon.(cinder)
Wow, just wow! The range of emotions shown in this story is incredible. Absolutely can't wait for part 3. Keep up the great work!
I have never posted a message back on here before but I felt compelled to do so, this is by far one of the best stories I have ever read and can't wait for part 3 please x
Its been quite a while? Hope ch.3 is on its way .............. Still love it :)
Part three has been posted and is pending authorization.
There might have been some mistakes that slipped through, my editor was unavailable and I didn't want to you all waiting any longer. Hopefully it was worth the wait
If she ends up with Alice after Alice took advantage of her drugged out state (her own drugged out state is no excuse), then there is something wrong.
She should be with Dr. Simon,, or maybe the lawyer.
Without the drugs there will be NO Alice!
This is not only a little scary ...... If you really experienced some horror trip loosing a family on one moment, the guilt will overtake right away after coming back to senses and the knowledge of the happenigs will start to kill you, to cheat your soulmate after some weeks after an horrible death ...... If this scenario would be settled one year after , ok , but weeks ...... And with the suicide already in the background, this is strange
This story is based on a borderline with happenings to survive such drastic horror trip and you scripted this Into an intense extraordinary tale ...... πππππππππβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈ
Yawn. Boring. Don't care to read about a half dead character slide into oblivion. It's not a story. It's meaningless detail.
Upon a second reading, I am sure they should have just left her in the bathtub.
They saved her for *this*?