All Comments on 'Just a Date'

Very warm, touching and loving story that held us so very misty and holding our breath until the last words were like Cupid’s arrow to our hearts.

Thank you for writing from your heart.

OP wrote a lot of awkward dialogue. For example, reminding the wife of a client that Laura didn't want to talk about her husband's death. How rude is that? Normally, most people not raised by wolves would leave it alone, opting instead for the widow to elaborate if she chose. Strange. Also, what CEO of a major corporation lives in a house where they only have their son's former bedroom for guests? Wasn't he one of what, three or four children? No more bedrooms? Since they first saw them at the celebration, one assumes the siblings weren't staying with their parents. Also, there's a company-owned lodge across the street. You never propose at another couple's wedding, but at least they kept in on the down low. OP gets credit for rehabilitating Tracy. This is one of those decent stories that a good editor could turn into a memorable great story.

Stupid ending with the dumb bat grabbing the mic!! Lily was devious

Hair woman bald girl

Lot of playing around at school etc

Not that I don't believe it but I was one of those who really liked woman and then sex. Also being overseas in military where STDs were sometimes 90 % slowed me down. Now USA has a lot of cities with STDs extremely high. Although most are curable I can not understand the sex parties and gang bangs

Pass

some of these comments are just pure assanine dg i love it when you write these kind of storys 5 stars for sure

Great as usual. The author understands people and writes true to life stories. 5

The Hoary Cleric