All Comments on 'Just an Old-Fashioned Romance'

Well written. I find most romances a bit on the humdrum side, but you weave a detailed plot through a well written story.

I found the story too long--perhaps because it was Jake and Carol's storyline that held my interest, Charlie and Karen also, and the others not much at all.

I don't know about other readers, but I'd prefer a story of this length to be submitted in 2-3 parts, because reading it all at one go takes a long time.

But you write very well--among the best writers on this site. I hope we'll see more of your work, perhaps on other topics as well.

Thanks for your story!

well written, always inspiring and truly keeps the readers interests...there is honestly something for everyone in this story, you've done such a good job at making it all come together while still keeping each person true to themselves...i like the long stories and i would have been happy to spend another 10 chapters reading on. i wish i could rate this one a 10 instead of a 5...again..so well done. i was just speaking with another friend about bdsm and how it is written and how people think its all beating and abuse which of course...it is not. This story is one of the closest ones i've seen that does show a closer resemblence to real life in the bdsm...not in the imagination of the unknown while still keeping it hot and heavy. Bravo and you've got my vote. a fan in Texas