All Comments on 'Just For Us'

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dacoach44dacoach44over 10 years ago
So sensual

Certainly a woman in love. Author conveys so well how deeply these two know each other, despite the distance. They are in a constant state of arousal and passion, and this is well described in many passionate ways that lovers have. They are so giddy and helpless with each other that they might as well be teenagers. Yet we see they have the experience and patience of skilled lovers. Bravo for this piece!

redhotbotheredredhotbotheredabout 10 years ago
sigh of pleasure

Wonderful! Delightful details. Can feel the heat and eroticism rise with each teasing glance and touch. So glad you are adding to your repertoire!

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