All Comments on 'Just Friends'

What a great story! Loved the characters and your writing! I really hope you plan on adding more parts to this because it's 'that good' and deserves to be made into a mini series!

LOVED IT!

Very good yarn - I loved it! Keep up the good work and I sincerely hope we see lots more from you.

Thanks for sharing!

Larry Steiner - Grand Rapids, Michigan

Y'all is plural. It's like you guys. If you are only addressing one person it is YOU.

As a retired female Army officer, I really got into this! It was well written, too.

Ya'll is plural, darlin. I couldn't get into the story because it was used incorrectly every few sentences.

Dude, I liked your story; it was sensual, sexy and funny at times. You are a good writer and it felt like I was there because of how well described the sex was.

Hmm... I counted at least two UCMJ violations...

...in a well written, very erotic story.

Bravo Zulu!

Definitely felt like I was in the middle of the sex scenes from the way you described them, really enjoyed reading the story

This was great. This deserves a followup.

"and soon her taught asscheeks": The word you're looking for is "taut", unless her asscheeks are well educated.

I dislike anonymous trolls. Ignore them! This was a romantic story of the beginning of a beautiful relationship. She said that it was just for fun, but it looks long term to me. I liked the ending with Linda appearing and loving the new couple. Bet the video was great.

Seriously hot!!