All Comments on 'Just Good Friends'

I like your tale.It moved a little fast and the old girl friend was not really

told to hit the road. a little of in your face for the old may have been nice.

paying for her house was nice but the lights etc are not paid and you

only said you would pay for the house. a lot of things in your tale are on

your to do list.

Sometimes it takes a while to figure out who the one is.

Very sexy.

great first story. you know when the right one comes along

Written by a wanker

Good premise, but seemed rushed towards the middle and end. Keep up the writing!

i loved it i wanted to fuck and suck his cock myself

The tease of "End of Part 1," at the bottom implies there is a Part 2 to follow. I hope it comes soon!

A good story but it could have been a great story if it was not so rushed. For example, they went to the beach but nothing that happened there was described. They seemed to jump into bed very quickly. IF you had teased it out building the sexual and emotional tension it would have made for a better story.

Similarly, the sex was rushed and seemed incomplete.

The best stories are developed more slowly so the reader can anticipate and enjoy the journey.

Still it is a good first story; I don't think I could do as well.