All Comments on 'Just in Time Valentine'

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Mandy MelonsMandy Melonsabout 18 years ago
Read and re-read!

Hi,

I read all of your poems and loved them- this is nice to see a story from you, also. Very moving and heart-felt.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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With that kind of tutoring

I could ace every class!

Unsung MuseUnsung Museabout 18 years ago
Very Interesting!

Quite enjoyable.

What a unique piece!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Path Not Taken

Why is it that I could never find a poetry class like that back in school?

R. Richard

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 18 years ago
Congratulations, ET...

...on trying something a bit different. Thanks for giving us an interesting, enjoyable read.

Rumple

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 18 years ago
Lyrical

Very erotic piece! Makes me wish that I had learned poetry in such a way. It was lovely, and good luck to you.

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 18 years ago
Interesting combination

of prose and poetry. I liked the story, but I think you were a bit sloppy. Shame on you, as the shifting tenses mar a lovely Valentine addition. ;)

Good luck.

Black Tulip

Erotica_WritingsErotica_Writingsover 18 years ago
always erotic

Your work is always great

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 18 years ago
Interesting combination

of prose and poetry. I never had an English tutor but if I had, I would have wanted one like Rose.

damppantiesdamppantiesover 18 years ago
Beautiful

The words flow, neither prose nor poetry, but a delicious mix of the two. I enjoyed this. :)

templemindedtemplemindedover 18 years ago
excellent

great as always

love you,

nin-

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sappily erotic and

very panty wetting. A great tale that brings the beautifully flowing prose of the great poets with the sexual sensuality of pure erotica. Very Hot.

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years ago
great

great valentine Art!

beautiful imagery...

~LB~

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Erotica at it's best...

Mmmmm Art you are a true erotica writer. Such beautiful visions. Thank you for the beauty you pen!

L~

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