by twistedjoe37
Good story. Keep writing. And a pregnancy sounds interesting. =)
The daughter could intern for him or join a club near his work; she could also try seducing the mom or convince her that only a loving man like her father should be her first.
Keep going bud, good story. I like the one persons suggestion involving the mother. Maybe even coming up with a story that it was her and the daughters idea for the daughter to seduce the father, and impregnate her.
I know this probably sounds lame, but I thought of it after I wrote my other idea. The mother bring part of an ancient cult based witchcraft almost put down by the Czar, but flourished under Lenin and Stalin, and incest is part of a ritual.
you need to continue cause this series is hot but dont listen to mrpervy46's comment about her workin with stalin an lenin.Cause thats just racist and not cool.His other sujestion was good but ignore the kgb crap.Your doin a great job on your own.keep up the good work!!!!
It was pretty good until you had to go anal. Should have kept going the way you started, with just her mouth. But that would have taken imagination to think of things she could do with her mouth. Much easier to do what everyone else does and take her pussy, then her ass. I quit reading then, but I guess you did ATM. When you can write stories that show imagination you get better ratings.
You've made me so wet... Excellent job. Can't wait to read more. xoxo
just another vote to continuing this one! wonderfully written and full of fun.
You've done great - keep it up! Sasha should seduce her Mom to complete the triangle. You'd have lesbian sex, anal sex, three way sex, double incest, etc. The only limit is your imaqgination and hard work. And ignore the negative comment about anal sex - anal sex is great - I get my ass stuffed at least weekly!
I agree with the last comment. Keep the story unfolding, let's see where this leads. Maybe Anna ALMOST catches them, and gets suspicious, stays home one day and spies on them having anal sex. Wonder just how wild and kinky she'd be if she found herself getting turned on watching her husband and her daughter together in such a dirty, taboo pose.
Please feel free to write your own story, Joe. You've done solid work so far and I'm glad folks are voting and chiming in, but their bevy of plot requests is just silly. Ignore the retarded demands from the cheap seats and write what you like. That's the nice part about being the _actual_ author. ;p
I just submitted the final chapter of this series and it should post in a few days, but I wanted to thank everyone for all the comments and ideas. I'll probably steal a couple of them and leave the rest for all of you to write. Can't wait to read them!
Love to all,
TJ
NOW THIS GETTING MORE SEX MORE HEAT AND NOW I CAN SEE WHERE YOUR GOING WITH THIS..........................................."R".................................
made me so wet with the vivid descriptions! excellent! you could have drawn out the fingers-oral scenarios tho before the actual sex. hopefully they will keep cumming many more times before anna catches on. at least drag that out for us! hot hot hot!!
As a father I should have never even looked at the title yet alone read this. I hav e to say this one of the hottest stories I have ever read. this shit is nasty and dirty, oh so wrong in an infinite way. Sex with a sexy woman produces a sexy teen daughter that is as sexual as both parents. Dad feels the sexual raise of his daughter and has become a slave to their shared lust. damn that is too hot.
Some parts were kind of 'Duhhhh...' Like this: "We'd started out with a simple rule: we'd only use mouths and fingers, and I wouldn't fuck her for fear of getting her pregnant." *COUGH CONDOM COUGH* But other than that, well done, thanks again good sir!
The best chapter so far,.still Chapter 01. My overall review will be at the end of forthcoming Chapter 04.
Wow this story just keeps getting better and better . Great Loving story.
I am really excited to read the last chapter .
One more chapter left. Will he impregnate her? Will the mother find out - maybe even join in? Will she reveal she was fucking her own mom or others on her trip in Russia? So many questions... I guess I should read on to find out.