All Comments on 'Just Pathetic'

Very hot and erotic! I could feel the fury and passion between the both of them. What a great story. Hope to read more from you soon.

I loved the direction of the story, where it ended up heading... great work!

Very very nice, great surprise, thanks.

Thanks for expressing a wish that many of us hope might come true someday.

Thank you all for your feedback and comments so far. I appreciate every single one! I'm glad you enjoyed this. I know I am really enjoying writing them! And a thank you for the emails I have received as well. I'm truly thankful for everyone's thoughts. :)