by kaiyandom
Needs some polish....a rough read and a ending that was real rough if you ask me.
I liked your story, but the second half was a bit rough for Erotic Couplings; you should have put it in NonConsent/Reluctance.
This one of the best got me going big time. thanks lofther68,
He said he didn't want to hurt her, yet he most definitely did...definitory nonconsenting and rape.