All Comments on 'Just the Beginning'

Just found this story. Very well done!

Sorry, the little disclaimer didn't end up with this. I wrote this for a guy I'm seeing as a teaser. I was hoping to get some feedback before I showed it to him. I think if it had said that it would make more sense.

both wanted the other,so why'd you end it?

You have got to be kidding. I would understand it if this was half a story, it isn't even half a page.

stupid

You stopped writing WAY too soon!! Just getting to the best part and you STOPPED! AWE... that's just mean! C'mon, write the rest of it!