All Comments on 'Just the Beginning'

this story freekin owned. keep up the good work

what a short story that got me all worked up in one page, brill!

plus, my name's martin, so hell yeah, i'll have some of that please =)

keep up the good work

I remember us talking about using this for a story. Very well done baby. Makes me hard again just reading it. You're the best. -M

The attention to detail definitely created some stimulating imageryUSA

Hi again Cyn...........just read this one and went to wet immediately.......keep up the excellent writing........Lydia......xooxxoxo