by NeonBlack169
me & my gf have played this exact fantasy out as i did just what the guy in the story did....had my cock rock hard reading this. Write another "reluctant-but-cant-stop...shouldn't-be-doing-it" kinda story....those are the best.
Great story..well written..good build up.
Yeah, just the tip... And we all know where that leads, don't we? Well--maybe just a little bit more.
Then, if once was okay, maybe just one more time. And we all know where that leads, too. Again and again--that's what. So bad, but at the same time, sooo good! Can't leave your hands off it, can you?
Great story.
I really enjoyed the reluctance and taboo of this. It was well written. Thank you. Kind of a bittersweet ending, but I enjoyed it.
Most of the entries in this contest read like someone's larger-than-life jack-off fantasy, but this one was entirely believable. The pacing and dialogue were very well done. It was more arousing because of that real-life quality, just like a real girl is more exciting than the glossy ones in the stroke magazines.
Like most of us, we've been there and done that. Nice story, well written and very believable. I had an Aunt I thought about a lot but never had the chance to do anything except masturbate and dream. Oh well, it's always nice when things come together like it did for Rhonda and A J.
seems more realistic regarding what an incestuous nephew/son/brother might feel, while still engaging in continued sex with the other relative-nicely written, hot sex thanks
I feel as if there's more to their story. Idk if this is true or not, but I loved it. I do hope, if possible, that you'll consider a sequel.
Going down the line, reading story after story, not a one has made me think it might be a winner - until now. Best I've read so far. Good luck.
This is exactly WTF erotica should be. Excellent. The sex was vital to the story, drove the plot, and forced character growth. Then, like icing on the cake, it leaves you thinking after it's done. Loved it.
Hot...Hot...Gonna do the same to my nephew. Already made up my mind about that. Break him in right and ruin him for all other women. Just the tip? I think not. I want every inch he's got and from what I've seen there's plenty. Uh Huh!
Real emotions and a situation any extremely horny, teenage boy (but I repeat myself) might just possibly find himself in with the right, or more accurately, the wrong older woman.
No grand romance; no far-fetched plot; just confused affection, lust and the inevitable guilt that comes from being human and making a choice you aren't sure is the right one; no matter how good it feels.
Enjoyed the realism and the guilt afterwards. Made the story believable.
Excellent piece of writing. It has that level of quality, that deceptive impression that this is easy for the writer, that the natural flow of his prose produces the perfect scenes for his readers, and the bittersweet mix of professional admiration and envy in his contemporaries.
B
I once had sex with my Aunt she must have been 40 and single I was late teens, it was all very furtive very quick and not terribly satisfying and we only did it the once.