All Comments on 'Just You and I'

by CoventinaNyx

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lisaisaleftylisaisaleftyabout 12 years ago
Is this a one off,

or do you have plans to make this a series?

CoventinaNyxCoventinaNyxabout 12 years agoAuthor
More to come!

I do plan a series for this, I just havent decided which direction I want to go yet. Suggestions are always welcome!

lisaisaleftylisaisaleftyabout 12 years ago
character development?

I'd like to know more about our victim, the usual who, what, when, where, how... You set up a fantasy scenario, so if you continue, it'd be interesting to see how it plays into and affects her regular day-to-day life. It's a great start so far...

CoventinaNyxCoventinaNyxabout 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the advice

I am working fleshing out both of the main characters in this story. I have some very specific ideas for both of them. Thanks for the input and encouragement, it's very appreciated.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
one of the best

one of the best erotic stories I have read

CoventinaNyxCoventinaNyxabout 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Stay tuned, there's more to come!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
holy good batman

that was awesome.. i feel like i was there

CoventinaNyxCoventinaNyxabout 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

That's what I was going for, allowing the reader to be in the story.

visioneervisioneerabout 12 years ago
great job

Congratulations on writing a great story in second person. That's hard to do well. I hope you post more.

IceWoman73IceWoman73over 11 years ago
Pulled...

You've pulled this right from my deepest dreams and fantasies. Thank you. I'm looking forward to reading more and more and more please. Excellent story.

yourbrotherinlawyourbrotherinlawabout 11 years ago
Yup

I'd do that to my sister in law!

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

Funniest thing ever when she said he rammed her into a coma...loved it and yes im sure he's quite proud

P.LighthouseP.Lighthouseabout 8 years ago
Frightening and beautiful!

I never thought a rapist could have my sympathy. You made it possible.

This is the second of your stories I read.

The first one – "The first time" - was a favorite story; now you are a favorite author.

I love to read you!

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