All Comments on 'Kailyn'

Very nice. A bit of lovin', beforehand, might have made it even better....

Lukas

Story could have used more build up, and more foreplay and teasing when the act finally happened!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

Could use more foreplay, and time. It moved too quickly in my opinion

Too many stories are unbalanced with oral sex. This was a believeable story with just the right amount for the first time. I thought they jumped into bed too quickly. They could have shared the shower for instance A little more buildup could have given the story a little added punch. No pun intended! All in all a good job. No pun intended

Verry. Good. Skype. Peter.lowe. 561 /. Surrey/england