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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
congrats!!!

Thank you for a malaysian erotic stories.Love it.Hope you can write more of malaysian erotica.

hollyvaughanhollyvaughanover 11 years ago
Good but not that good..

I like your imagination but you gotta work on your grammar and other stuff like that. Thanks for the story. I can guarantee that your future stories will get a lot hotter if you just take the time to improve on your grammar or just find an editor. Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
WTF

Make up your kind of the brother is Rahman or Raj? Don't steal stories and post them as your own!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
copied story

read this elsewhere

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