All Comments on 'Kale and Parker Ch. 01'

Hot story. Well written, discovering that you like to be forced, that you like to be mouth fucked is a mind blowing self discovery. When its happened once, you realize you want it to happen again and again.

That was weird. I feel like there's some serious back story missing here. And the peeing was one step too far. I'll keep reading, if only to see where you take this.

really hot story man, keep writing! only a moron would take it so seriously to hate on you for it

I found it highly erotic and really interesting. I have been waiting for the nexr chapter can we plz have one asap!!! Im keen to find out the connection between those two (background story) and wether they will take things further or not, especially will the fall in love..lol

plz plz plz can we have the next chapter!!

Finish the story already i hate cliffhangers