All Comments on 'Karen'

Well done. I wanted Karen to resist while she resisted, but to surrender when she surrendered.

I'm astounded ther are no comments. This is a classic!

this whole story is a crock theres no other way to put it,the only reason I read the whole thing was I kept hoping she would end up putting an end to him before he could marry her daughter,or maybe him being hit by a car, would have been nice also,anything would have been better than him ending up the winner, I really would have liked to had him falling asleep and her handcuffing him to the bed spread eagled and taking his whip and beating him into totol submission to her

WOW!!! This was a really hot one!!! The whole idea of his impregnating her at the end was a little off-putting though - the language was like a biology class at times - it would have been better to know that she was HIS slave totally then, and a hint given of what she would have to do for him next... nevertheless ... HOT!!!

A great little story, well paced and hot.

This story is so hot, it's insane.

How you were able to get inside a woman's mind like that is incredible.

I am on fire...

I hope you will write part two soon!

My heart is pounding after reading this.

I think you have good insight into the heart of a submissive.

What I Liked , was the link between the sex and pregnancy. If there is anything that arouses me , it is the thought of making a woman pregnant .It is the most primal thing Imaginable ! So often, erotic stories ignore this link. You did not. Well done

Because she WOULD have gotten up and walked out. And she would have told her daughter and husband. Any woman would have and the rest of the story is poppycock and a waste of time.

the submission and the mantra was really hot. you should have found a reason to use the whip. I hope there is a karen 2

An amazing story of raw emotion loved it would love to have a woman like you as mine.

I enjoyed that a woman who wants and needs to be taken, owned and enjoyed. The raw sex between them was really very enjoyable. I hope you have many sequels in store for us. Thank you.

Can't wait to read more from you!

Great story and well told.

Can't wait til he ties her up!!! :)

The comments were all like 'cant wait to hear from you', they dont even check the authors biography.... c'mon he's not active anymore! this story had been hanging like 14 years ago!! there is no continuation and there certainly would be no story coming from him again! duh!!! but YEAH!! his stories were defintely good:)) i hope he's fine coz his age says hes over 60... :(

being used and trained to be a wet cunt

And very well crafted story full of power and passion. All in all, a fine job of erotica, almost believable.

I can't wait to see this story unfold.

Why do writers use big agonizing words readers struggle to understand or even try to pronounce. You bring the ! whole family in thru out the story, than leave them out at the end! I'm ole fashion I like a happy, sad, what ever ending? Karen, was happy but

this reader felt wasted time. good luck next story.

have read this story on several occasions, and I love it every time I read it. First Karen in denial, then giving in to her cravings and needs. I had a Karen once in my life!

I was literally pulled to the climatic ending. Thank you for this excellent read! Besides the scintillating subject matter, this was very helpful in demonstrating the format required by this website.

In simple words: WOW! This was a wonderful way to start my day. I am truly inspired. Thank You!

Loved it, pregnancy at the end I didn't see coming. But I liked your descriptions and the mantra

I was just waiting for the whole situation to explode with two unhappy bystanders, Polly and George, getting hurt and Eric leaving Karen alone and devastated,

This is a story of a user and the used being waste at the end.

If this is truly an insight into a woman's mind, then good writing because it seemed rationally irrational to me as Karen fought the lust for Eric against the love and loyalty for her daughter and husband.

Still I was on edge for the last three quarters of the story and that made me uncomfortable.

Mother-in-law has an affair with son-in-law, this could fall under the following categories: incest, loving wives or non-consent/reluctance. There are elements of coercion and blackmail (helping out financially and paying school fees) but is NOT BDSM.

We need Karen 2.

A rare gem. Perfect description of a woman's thoughts. This must be egregiously hot to women.

Oh get those papers ready Cuz, divorcing this dirtball should be as easy as a SLAYER bass line 😜

My fellow men if this ever happens to you (even though you are heart broken and can't seem to stop crying) act like you are so glad to send her packing, don't over do it but as she is moping around in the days after the fall out let her see your eyes roll when she says how sorry she is....

Seriously try it now looking at yourself in the mirror, picture her saying

"how my God sweetheart I am so sorry and ashamed, I have ruined my family and the only man I have ever loved, I just want to die for how bad I hurt you "

NOW YOU= go ahead give that sad, quivering lip that says you are lost without her love, but just as she's about to walk away hit her with the ROLLING EYES.

When she looks puzzled and confused, say "what "? But not harshly. I'M SERIOUS, that last second glimpse of you rolling your eyes will be one of the last thoughts before she goes to sleep at night and the first one when she wakes up in the morning years after the divorce, even if the pig is fucking three poor bastards a day