by monkeyjoe3
Absolutely awesome. The sex scenes were explicit without going overboard, very nice.
I like the touch of remorse you added to Joe for treating her badly the first night, makes him seem more human.
The reluctance of Karen to do anything more after she had cum is very believable as well. It's that euphoric feeling wearing off after the release... just like most girls I've been with.
Well written and very erotic. Hope Pt. 2 is coming SOON...