by StoneyLodge
Chapter 1 is just the foundation and "teaser" tis true -- more is in the pipeline awaiting approval by the Literotica editorial staff -- and I trust you will not be disappointed!
Very nicely setup, even if a bit fast to the punch.
Clearly something I would like to see played out more, but don;t rush it and make sure detail such as clothing style and his actions are included.
The set up is well written and I'm sure the sequel won't disappoint!
Over coming shyness, even reluctance, is fine, making a story suspenseful. Seduction is fun to do and watch, but drugging someone into a coma takes all the suspense out.
This story isn't about fishing. It's about buying filets at the grocery store. Boring.