by StoneyLodge
Excellent use of tension build up, and visual descriptors to aid the reader. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I've always said "different strokes for different folks" and this particular variety of "stroke story" isn't for everybody -- only those who are into non-consent, rape, etc. I warned readers up front to pass this story up if the gentre is not for you. Your voting a "0" therefore becomes unfortunate and might discourage those who might appreciate it since it drags the rating down. You would probably not enjoy Chapter 3 which will be posted as soon as the Literotica editors approve. However, thanks for explaining your vote. Hopefully, others will more than counter your "O!" -- Stoney
THis is kind of like my fantasy except that I am the one in the plan and my husband is tied up unaware. ANd in mine to it goes beyond the original plan. Good job and the writing was excellent.
Very arousing! Well written!! Looking forward to reading more of your work. Dee;)
Even thou this story does cause a stir it does make one think how true this story could be, or maybe it is.
I love this story, especially how the friend took control to help the husband fulfill his fantasy!
I love stories where the wife is broken down and begins responding, unable to control the situation. I would imagine that happening to my wife.