All Comments on 'Kate's Other Life'

Almost missed this down on the bottom of the page. Long time no read. Love your writing style and especially love the way you express your conflicted nature so well. I hope this marks the return of one of my favorite writers here. Love from your friend, Tom.

A little scary but realistic.

From a complete hetero male, who is not especially into either lesbians or BDMS or watersports, it was a very intense story. The response of the protagonist, though, should be seen and recognized as more the reaction to something new and shocking, not something necessarily indicating a long-term 'direction' or desire.<br><p>

But I, for one, would just as soon pass on THIS kind of new experience! LOL!

and ultra nasty. More power to your elbow!

I couldn't get past the first few paragraphas. Who told you it was ok to write in the present tense?

a follow-up?

Hey, great story. This one definitely feels like it was ripped from the memory of an incredible event. No doubt the characters are 'real' in that sense. It's frighteningly magical how our frail humanity can lead to such interesting places in life. Those varied tapestries which paint wonderful, sometimes horrifying self portraits of our lives, can and do lead to these dark little corners of passion. Twisted by our history, they can only submit to an intensity beyond normal understanding. Your 'Baby' character is one such example. Her life - short, intense and passionate - could fill volumes!