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deepfisherdeepfisherover 17 years ago
Building a Climax

Since I found Tony's writing recently, I have been a avid reader of most of his stories.

It is wonderful to find an author who uses proper language, and not vulgarisms, to gradually build to the climax of both the characters and the story.

In many submissions on the site, the characters have their clothes off in seconds and in the same anount of time are engaged in rutting lust before the reader has a chance to get to know them.

Tony always takes time to develop his characters so that by the time they first find themselves alone, our imaginations are already working overtime. It is that imagination that ensures that both the characters, and the reader, can fully enjoy the foreplay, the engagement and the inevitable, but sustained, climax.

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