All Comments on 'Katie and John'

This is a joke, right? I mean, i never read a story this short on here before.

Now finish it.

Unlike the other comments, I think this story can end right here. Do we have any doubt how it will continue?

Sometimes our imagination can take over where the author left off.

This is very good stuff but I'm trying to figure out who the tease is ; the sister or the one writing the story ??

If you can continue with the same quality and style fine , otherwise let it be .

Throughout the story you were constantly telling him what to do and you spent little time expressing his hesitation. I think you should have either developed his shyness at touching you or not gone on and on and on about how he should apply lotion to you and where.

Mmm hot.... Want to see more.

Very good start

is he going to get his big brotherly cock up her cute little cunt or not?