by katiebug22500
Decent enough story, needs fleshing out a bit. Also could use an editor, you keep using the wrong words in places. As an example, you use "sense" where you should be using "since", and you overused it as well.
He's her stepdad, and 13 years older than her? I'm not saying it doesn't happen, but that seems awfully unrealistic.
The story is a fantasy, but...step dad could've been younger than her mom....and birth control can be taken by virgins. Women are on the pill for reasons other than contraceptive. Examples could include regulating out of control menstrual cycles or to assist with pain associated with periods. Get a grip folks!
If a girl is on the pill she doesn't have periods
Melenna, you are right in that it may not happen all that often but take me for example. My ex was 10 years older than me and had her first daughter when she was 15, and yes, getting used to being only 5 years older than my step-daughter was an adjustment for sure.
That wade the story really difficult to go on with.
I think it is partly fiction and partly true I think she wanted him and maybe they were close and touched but never really had sex and she is looking back wishing she had
Girls on the pill still have periods that's why a lot of them go on the pill to regulate their periods. Depending on which pill she's on she can still have monthly periods or a period every third month.
I love the story plot, but it's truly irritating when the author accidentally wrote "sense" instead of "since", at least four times in a paragraph!
Jeebus I didn’t think it was possible but they are actually going downhill.