All Comments on 'Katie and Stepdad Are Home Alone'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Decent enough story, needs fleshing out a bit. Also could use an editor, you keep using the wrong words in places. As an example, you use "sense" where you should be using "since", and you overused it as well.

MelennaMelennaalmost 10 years ago
Ages

He's her stepdad, and 13 years older than her? I'm not saying it doesn't happen, but that seems awfully unrealistic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
The comments are crazy!

The story is a fantasy, but...step dad could've been younger than her mom....and birth control can be taken by virgins. Women are on the pill for reasons other than contraceptive. Examples could include regulating out of control menstrual cycles or to assist with pain associated with periods. Get a grip folks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
why she might be on birth control

If a girl is on the pill she doesn't have periods

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
@Melenna

Melenna, you are right in that it may not happen all that often but take me for example. My ex was 10 years older than me and had her first daughter when she was 15, and yes, getting used to being only 5 years older than my step-daughter was an adjustment for sure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
It's SINCE not SENSE.

That wade the story really difficult to go on with.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
beautiful

I think it is partly fiction and partly true I think she wanted him and maybe they were close and touched but never really had sex and she is looking back wishing she had

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
um yes they do!!

Girls on the pill still have periods that's why a lot of them go on the pill to regulate their periods. Depending on which pill she's on she can still have monthly periods or a period every third month.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Sense

I love the story plot, but it's truly irritating when the author accidentally wrote "sense" instead of "since", at least four times in a paragraph!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sequel?

Please make a sequel to this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Oh God...

I SOOO want to be Katie! Hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Spelling

Jeebus I didn’t think it was possible but they are actually going downhill.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Just wish I was the one that got to fuck Katie for the first time

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