All Comments on 'KatieLynn & Tucker'

Hey girl, that was fantastic, really hot. I liked the build up of the spanking and foreplay. Made me get hard just listening to the story as my wife read it to me. Keep up the good work and thanks for the descriptions of the positions.

This was the first posting from this author. This story was much more lustful than her latest. I enjoyed the fact that although both stories had the same characters the storyline line was much different. So many authors here write rehash after rehash. Keep you the good work.--r

The spanking added just the right level of "naughtiness" to make this an incredibly hot story. Your description of the sexual acts was superb.

I'm not just referring to this piece, but your writing in general and overall; you're a talented writer. What I particularly enjoy is the way in which you draw the reader in until it seems as if we are almost sitting on your lap, well I can but hope.

I am starting to write for Lit and hopefully I can persuade you to read my stuff as it gets on the site. More importantly though is how can I persuade you to reply, so that we can keep in touch? Any suggestions please send to london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk

Thanks a lot and best of luck

James

PS The photo's not bad either!!!