All Comments on 'Kay's Dad Ch. 01'

An excellent beginning to what may be a series. Daddy does his daughter's ass, first time out, Congratulations!

In the middle of this you briefly change her name to Emma, which is from one of your other stories.

You write fairly well but you really need to re-read and edit before submitting. Lots of typo's and some name changes. Sorry if I appear somewhat negative.

Overall the story had the makings and COULD have been a real dandy.

Great story- the sexual progression and building tension was wonderful; now we need a hard rauchy sex episode

next chapter please!

I love this story. I'd love to have a Daddy like you I could seduce like this.

Good arousing story. Nice buildup to the climax.

Who is EMMA???"Emma drew back and looked at me intently"

They talk as though they are reading out loud.

From a very badly written script!

Pretty good story, all in all! ...though, if I were him, that sweet, wet, pink,virgin pussy that is killing me with its delicious smell would be my first priority!! Her tight little ass we can work on in about an hour, hehe!

It was good, but he whole time I was wishing he was fucking her pussy. Especially on the first time. That’s usually something most people have to warm up to. Especially with someone so young.

Truly, pussy is much better than anal. I've had it both ways, and know.