All Comments on 'Keep It In The Family'

You are head and shoulders above the vast majority of authors at this site. In addition to being unbelievably sexy, your stories read like real events and not like those where the author simply puts some words on paper to excite a reader.

Please keep writing.

Goodness! One hell of a story, and I absolutely agree with the comments that were left by "Anonymous". I cannot wait to read another chapter! Please, have it posted as soon as possible

Janamarie:

This is one sexy story. I may be wrong but I also have a sense that this story went in some directions you hadn't intended it to go. Am I wrong? Regardless, Let it flow, let it go where it will, and carry on. It's too good to let it die and too many questions are begging answers. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I'll give top marks for a very well-told story - but I hate any anal content, as do several ladies I know!

Chapter 2, soon?

Lukas

love this story. great bit of writing. it was like being

there in the room watching the aunt and both brother and sister having sex then the aunt joining in with them fantastic story. do hope you are going to do a follow up to this one. sex between siblings.

Hot story here. Cath is fucking Paul for months, and now in the 2nd part she is fucking Mark and wants him to pull out so she will not get pregnant. Doesn't fit here.

Personally, I don't like it when it is worded that way and it seems that cath should have enough sense to have been on the pill after getting her pussy working again after so much time off.

Other than that you have a great story.

Thanks.

only a guy could be so ignorant about a hymen. It's not a complete barrier inside the vagina. It's at the front and not some mystical complete barrier. Read up on female anatomy and stop pretending you're a chick.

Your writing is incredible. Your descriptive account of the action was spot on and very exciting. You had me cumming twice in this one story. Looking forward to reading many more of your stories as well.

A good story

I really enjoy your writing style and will read more of your stories