All Comments on 'Keeping on the Team Ch. 01'

yes please continue

Seems like it could get interesting if you handle the plot well.

more pretty please! :)

Two thumbs (and something else) up!

Excellent story. I like how the events were told from the females point of view. The control angle is also a big turn-on for me. Looking forward to more from you.

she sounds hot and slutty but I think you spent too much time in her thoughts

i feel like something is really missing from part one to part two

Hot... I love that she's doing this for a reason and so it keeps her doing whatever he says even though she doesn't really want to. I especially how you balance how she would be enjoying it if he would do things a little diff vs. how she feels like a toy and so doesn't like it.

The mr. rosebud thing had me giggling too =)

Please continue! That was such a great story, I love things having to do with exercise and older-younger :).

Was the hottest story I have found so far on Lit.

Thank you!