All Comments on 'Keeping Options Open'

Is this it? Will there be more added? This reads like a start to a longer story. I hope you add more to this story,

more...please..

this was a good read. the strait sex threw me. hope you continue. i like the character development and look for more.

more please .?

This is pretty good so far, despite the sheer implausability of Nigel acting so blatantly unprofessional in a serious work environment and the the fact that a cop would never ignore dispatch and the chief probably wouldnt be on the radio, not in NYC anyway. But other than that, the action is hot and the story is developing nicely. Just remember to keep it real :)

i agree with the previous comment, please try to keep it real. i'm from birmingham in the uk like the characters are supposed to be, and we rarely use the word chum here, i doubt you'd ever find someone from castle brom using chum. we don't have middle schools either. it just put me off a bit.

is that it.? where is the rest

I JUST WASTED MY TIME READING A FAG KISSED HIM AND THAT'S IT,THAT'S REALLY SAD THING TO DO,A FAGGOT LIKE ME WOULD LOVE TO READ HE SUCKED ON HIS COCK, ATLEAST ONCE, I'M SURE YOU COULD OF PUT THAT IN ...SO SAD OF A WRITER!!

This no gay love story or even close to a straight man discovering his gay inner self. The worst story ever. Stop writing for gay stories. Your work is terrible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please keep writing this story, I love it!!!