by drteetho
For continuing the story, very well written, excellent story. The erotica superb. I look forward to the next chapter when I hope Anita get blanked...
So give Kellie the hammer, and have her score six in the final end.
Well Done, well done.
Thank you,
M1
I agree with Mostera. You need to complete the storyline with a final chapter in which Anita gets her just deserves and the protagonists live happy ever after.
Good build up, realistic timeline, plausible chain of events, and great sex. In my opinion, these are the hallmarks of a really great romance story. Just one thing, I do not understand what ring Brad is wearing that shows that he is engaged. I did not know that a man would wear an engagement ring.