All Comments on 'Kelly Ch. 01'

I enjoyed your story very much. Very well written and very erotic! Can't wait for part two. John

This story flowed very nicely. It also has a high believability factor. Great writing. Look forward to more of the same.

This story is well written and beautifully romantic. The characters relate so sweetly to each other. I can't wait to read Ch. 02!

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

PLEASE continue these characters. Hard as it is to believe, mushy makes for exciting sex. Nice job!

So well written, great blending of love and sex. Very, very true to life. Such a treasure to read, I'm gonna make it a favorite! Bravo!!!!

The build up of romance, loving and tenderness leading to making love, not sex, makes these two lovers real. The exchange of normal and civilized conversation is attention getter. As if I was watching two lovers with dimension and dept, and caring for each other. Thanks for avoiding the gang bang approach that makes sex a mechanical exercise at best.

absolutely great !!!!

I'm just posting for the first time now...This series is definitely my favorite on all of this website. Great first chapter.

This was the best story ever! I have read over a 100 stories on this website, and I have to say yours is the best! This was the first comment I have ever made on this website because I believe this is the best story here! Thanks and please continue writing.

Excellent story. Thank you for sharing.

Likely should be in the romance category! Well Done!

I've never read any story which epitomises my own feelings and emotions .At the age

of 85 I can remember making love to many girls and women and have felt the same

desire to please them before myself.

Your story so far is beautiful and mirrors my feelings about sex in lovemaking. I am a widower so your stpries are my only reminder. Thank-You.

I am 7 days younger than Justin, but was a year ahead in school. If a Kelly had come into my life when I was a high school senior in the spring of 1972, she would have saved me almost a decade of pain and loneliness. Very sweet story. 5 stars.