by MisterReason
Grandpa Red doesn't know how lucky he is. I wonder what's going to happen when he goes to see the priest. He'll get ten Our Fathers and a lot of shit!
I enjoyed your writing style in this piece. As I went back and reviewed some of your other works, I found that I had enjoyed them as well in the past. Keep up the good work!
Most of the stories on the genre are far-fetched but this one has a hint of believeability that made it work for me. The characters were likeable, the emotions seemed real and the sex was smoking hot! Great read.
"Oh for heaven's sake," Edna groaned. "Kelly's in the house. Go do some push-ups or something. Take a cold shower."
Daaaamn! Kick that girl to the curb! Lol. She needs a good, hard spanking, then take the tv out of the house for the summer and see how long her attitude lasts! Hehe!
Loved it though, Im his age range, almost, so its easy to imagine it!