All Comments on 'Ken and Raven Ch. 01'

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HeadguyHeadguyover 10 years ago
Good Start

The sexual tension went down in the story with Ken's erection, but the story has many interesting possibilities because of the increased tension and potential conflict between Ken and Raven. You've got me at least for another installment...

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