All Comments on 'Kenny and His Cousins Ch. 05'

A little short, but good. Are we ever going to find out who Angela is?

I agree that it was too short. you need to make the next chapter longer. Other then that it was a good story. I would like to read more about his cousins and sister as well as finding out who is Angela.

Whoever Angela is, she obviously is known to him, since she's hiding her face, but she doesn't know that his parents were out of town. That probably rules out an aunt, but leaves in the possibility of a neighbor or fellow student.

I treat chapters as, well, CHAPTERS rather than individual stories. That's the only way I know how to do this. Right now I have three stories waiting around in Literotica Purgatory (sequels to my very first Literotica story, as it happens): two of them are kind of long, while the other one is so short, I'm not sure whether it's going to be approved.

And as long as I have your attention (if indeed I do)... if there's anybody out there who likes my stories and writes similar stories, and might be interested in a collaborative idea I have, please drop me a line.

I have a strange feeling Kimya is Angelina

More please...

once again we get left high and hard by an uncaring wanna be hack writer. i wish the sites webmasters would demand that the entire story be written out in rough draft BEFORE any editing or posting happens so the readers don't have to worry about a writer getting lazy LIKE THIS GUY.

I really like this story but where's ch.05 I really want to know who he's talking to on his computer. It's bugging me I need to know

As mentioned by others, so many stories on here start off well, pull you in, get you hooked on the plot, then they just stop and leave you high and dry with no ending. Just why do authors not finish.? It is so frustrating when it happens once, but it's happening far too often. Please authors, if you start a series, at least have the decency to finish it. You obviously have the inspiration to start, so please finish it as well, please?

This needs to be continued. We still don'the know who Angela really is.

Where's chapter 4?

Chapter 4 was renamed "Chapter 5" so I could insert a new Chapter 4.

And it'll be ready soon, sorry for the delay.

I love your stories, very erotic and we'll paced most of the time ... There are some that I would love to have continued/ completed ... Have to admit getting off to some of them 😁😎

There are some stories here I've wanted to continue or complete but have been stuck on, or just haven't have the time for. Let me know which ones you're interested in: it might be fun to have somebody else take over one of my stories.

Your stories are incredible, but I feel many of them are left unfinished. A Week with Cathy certainly needs at least another chapter after Cathy's mom and Gail walk in on her and Scotty. This story could easily be continued as well. Bakersfield Motel also needs a continuation/ending after Donny gets Wendy pregnant. I absolutely love your stories, but I need closure!! Lol

Bobm0973, many of these stories will be continued. I certainly don't want to leave a cliffhanger that doesn't go anywhere, but I also want to wait until I think I have it just right.

You should add some more chapters this story is great! And it is written really vividly

So well written and love the story line, too bad it’s over!! Would love to see what happens next!

There are more chapters in the works.