All Comments on 'Kept in the Dark'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
soooo nice

very nice... i like it so much... the romance and the mystery of it all.. inspires me to do the same. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great

WOW~ Great story!!!

Ib_SaysIb_Saysabout 5 years ago

Well with that ending there's no reason not to try for more than a single night in a sequel.

I find the whole ships passing in the night deeply unsatisfying anyway.

Was a bit cringeworthy to have her be a model.

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S_FoxS_Foxover 4 years ago
Really Good, until...

Liked the storyline, the sex was inspiringly realistic; BUT the former page 3 model was too sensational. I would have preferred further rounds & more developments. Hence only 4*.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Nice story

Well constructed storyline, with an original theme and very well written.

I loved the twist at the end.

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