by Otazel
very nice... i like it so much... the romance and the mystery of it all.. inspires me to do the same. :)
Well with that ending there's no reason not to try for more than a single night in a sequel.
I find the whole ships passing in the night deeply unsatisfying anyway.
Was a bit cringeworthy to have her be a model.
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Liked the storyline, the sex was inspiringly realistic; BUT the former page 3 model was too sensational. I would have preferred further rounds & more developments. Hence only 4*.
Well constructed storyline, with an original theme and very well written.
I loved the twist at the end.