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by sddcfreak

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Cute!

I liked the ending.

smysecretsmysecretover 13 years ago
Good ideas

But the style needs some work. Keep writing, get style advice and these ideas could make for some very interesting reading...

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