- Romance
- Killer Mike
- Page 4
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Click here"Honey, I believe you. I don't think he knows you are here. Wait here and let me talk to him some more. Girl that man has given so much of himself to and for others he is very fragile. Those of us who love him try to protect him and love him until he heals himself." She turned and walked out the door. Jo sat and cried some more. The door opened and Brenda took her hand and pulled her along. She whispered, "Come on, Dave is going to run you back to your office. I'll call you in about twenty minutes. This may let Mike salvage a bit of his dignity."
Jo grabbed Brenda by the shoulders, "You need to know something, please don't tell him. I missed my period yesterday and today. I won't use that to get him back. But it does make me need him more."
Brenda grinned, "I want to scream it from the roof tops but I'll let you do it. Congratulations girl. I love both of you."
Brigadier General Roberts sat at her desk and stared at the wall. The twenty minutes were long, long, gone. Then the phone rang. She answered it, it was her secretary, "General, LCOL Murphy is on the line, will you take the call?"
"Oh! Yes, put him through."
"Mike is that you?"
"Yes Babe, it's me, I think I owe you an apology. I know I needlessly upset you."
"Oh! Darling, I love you so. Please know I love you with all my cotton pickin' heart. I always will. Where are you? Can you meet me at our house? I have a surprise for you."
"A surprise for me? Wait, a surprise? No! Please tell me what I am praying is true. Is it?"
"Yes dear, I think it is, I'm not positive but I think I'm right, Daddy."
"HOLY SHIT! WOOPEE! I'm on my way home."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoThe author, who called himself a old guy has not been heard from in 13 years.
I think at this stage should be simple and just tell other readers if it is a good read or not.
It is a good read, but it is second tier.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoHow I loved Mike and Joanie. I imagined Mike as a sexy muscular man with a bit of dark chest hair, maybe even some dark hair on his bas. What a man! What a MAN! WHAT A GREAT MAN!
Anonymousover 6 years agoLike someone else commented, I would have liked to read a little about how the Light Col. looked up the Lt. in question and ripped him a new ass.
Anonymousover 7 years agoAs far as it went. I would have liked at least another half a page just to settle the problem with the other guy kissing the General. A whole page more, settling the kissing thing and then maybe addressing a possible retirement, would not have been out of order.
Chief3Blanketover 8 years agoIt seemed to get rushed at the end as if the author was in a hurry to get it wrapped up and done.
Anonymousover 8 years agoSo at the end Mike apologised to Jo?, nope.
"it meant so little to me that I never realize how it could hurt him."
Anyone (male or female) that is willing to do something so stupid that can hurt their love never learns and ends up doing it again and again.
Mike should have fucked her off straight away pregnant or not as she would end up the same as his ex-wife and fucking another guy with the pathetic excuse "I never knew it would hurt you" and "It was less than nothing to me".
Advice to anyone in that situation, run now before the wedding.
Tavadelphinover 9 years agoThey are all god - I have said that before -
This one was very well paced - you had the main characters know each other relate to each other long before the story starts - no rush to forever here - but when the dam broke - they all drowned in love heh.
Like so often - a careless act without clear though BUT no malice caused extreme pain -
3 rules I give Scorpio44 credit for -
They all presume your significant other is not believed present when you act.
1. How would they hear what you are about to say?
2. What would they think about or see in what you are going to do?
3. Would they follow the path you are about to walk down?
You may still act but you will have considered the impact first - hopefully you would never intentionally hurt that person -
Good story -
MrVdogalmost 12 years agoThe final scene makes no sense. How does Mike get past the kiss deal so fast? I need a better explanation - or am I missing something?
