by stevie3624
Very nice erotic story, good pacing and content. Will look forward to more in the future, please keep up the good work.
but in need of an editor. Numerous words were left out, or out of place in sentences that a good proofreader would have caught. Nice story though.
I ran hard copy. Means I'll be using it later to... Need I say more?
Yes Stevie3624,
you need some work on your spelling but dont stop here keep up the great stories and complete this story i know it can go further with Jason and Nali i love Nali and Jason sounds like a great lover for Nali i hope they have a baby together you might think about Naly and Jason having a baby togetherthink about that and maybe you could broaden nalis sex preference maybe she could be Bi it sounds sexy her and one of Jasons lady friends ,
Pat
Atlanta,Ga
I thought that Killer Mom was one of the best stories I've read on this site. This is the first comment I've left and I've been an avid reader for six years now. Im a huge fan of Incest/Taboo stories so I'll be looking forward to more writings from you. Great Job...
One of the best, if not the best, stories of mom / son love.
Write more!
Sooner rather than later, please?
Good work keep it going ! any thing like family sitters who get done by the family or by who they are sittng ?
Great work. You really took the time to develop this story and paint a picture in the readers mind. Captured the depth of feeling wonderfully.
His misconceptions about her nightly "beatings" was pretty funny when put into context.
So many elements combined successfully - erotic, mystery, suspense!
You, author seem to love assholes more than pussy. I believe a dick belongs where it was made to be, in a pussy. I prefer pussy 100:1 over any other opening...
VERY GOOD STORY, AND THE TITLE,
THAT WAS THE TWIST. YOU HOLD MY
MIND AT THE TWIST, THEN IN THE
MIDDLE,THE FUNNY PART ANSWERS
THE QUESTION. KILLER WHO????.
NICE JOB.
..THANKS..
ps. 5***** w/a twist.