All Comments on 'Killer Mom'

by stevie3624

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great story

Very nice erotic story, good pacing and content. Will look forward to more in the future, please keep up the good work.

toJohnny7toJohnny7over 17 years ago
Original story line,

but in need of an editor. Numerous words were left out, or out of place in sentences that a good proofreader would have caught. Nice story though.

not_with_my_wifenot_with_my_wifeover 17 years ago
Hard Copy

I ran hard copy. Means I'll be using it later to... Need I say more?

bornagainbornagainover 17 years ago
I agree Great Story

Yes Stevie3624,

you need some work on your spelling but dont stop here keep up the great stories and complete this story i know it can go further with Jason and Nali i love Nali and Jason sounds like a great lover for Nali i hope they have a baby together you might think about Naly and Jason having a baby togetherthink about that and maybe you could broaden nalis sex preference maybe she could be Bi it sounds sexy her and one of Jasons lady friends ,

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Stevie3624... Awesome Writing

I thought that Killer Mom was one of the best stories I've read on this site. This is the first comment I've left and I've been an avid reader for six years now. Im a huge fan of Incest/Taboo stories so I'll be looking forward to more writings from you. Great Job...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Super hot story

One of the best, if not the best, stories of mom / son love.

Write more!

Sooner rather than later, please?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Assumume Great

Good work keep it going ! any thing like family sitters who get done by the family or by who they are sittng ?

Cum againCum againalmost 17 years ago
Ah ... that hit the spot!

Great work. You really took the time to develop this story and paint a picture in the readers mind. Captured the depth of feeling wonderfully.

hawkeye0007hawkeye0007almost 12 years ago
Hot!

Well done... I really like this authors stories.

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchover 10 years ago

His misconceptions about her nightly "beatings" was pretty funny when put into context.

slowsizzlerslowsizzlerover 10 years ago
One of the best!

So many elements combined successfully - erotic, mystery, suspense!

Johnny0432Johnny0432over 6 years ago
Nice story as usual 5 stars

You, author seem to love assholes more than pussy. I believe a dick belongs where it was made to be, in a pussy. I prefer pussy 100:1 over any other opening...

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
Another story with a comedy twist. ^*!^*!^*!

VERY GOOD STORY, AND THE TITLE,

THAT WAS THE TWIST. YOU HOLD MY

MIND AT THE TWIST, THEN IN THE

MIDDLE,THE FUNNY PART ANSWERS

THE QUESTION. KILLER WHO????.

NICE JOB.

..THANKS..

ps. 5***** w/a twist.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I gave it 5 stars, especially with mommy in stockings.

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