All Comments on 'Kim's Training'

Would have been better if you had included the aftercare, so we knew he was a true master a not just a sadistic prick showing off for his friend.

This is simply the arrogance of torture and abuse. What was erotic or interesting about that? Nothing.

Maybe, the session is staged, so the second man can sample the slave. If he likes her, an arrangement is made and the leash is handed to him, to keep her.

Thanks for the comments. It's the first time I've ever written anything and was only thinking of the main idea I had in my head and getting off before bedtime. I'll take into consideration the ending of the story next time. Cheers.

Uncomfortable reading. He is no master.

I agree with some of the comments insofar as it is good to be clear that there are safe words / there is aftercare / the activity is consensual. But I enjoyed this and thought it was hot - there is a place for these more direct stories I think.