All Comments on 'Kim'

I'm almost Bill's age and often fantasize about being with someone like Kim. You captured the fantasy almost perfectly. Well-written, too. More please!

The category is all wrong.. not to mention that the story, for me at least, would of been a lot hotter if the main character wasn't so weak and pansy like.. Wrongly emotional, unappealing and definitely not deverse enough from what people think of the "typical" older man..Again.. I just don't find boring, polite conversations about personal schedules and random common memories attractive.. :P And the art conversation was painful.. You either know the author had that intent or you're a moron who thinks you had the first original thought about it O_o

it was a nice attempt, but I agree with the other comment. the category is all wrong, and I found myself skimming through the majority of the dialoge out of boredom.

BDSM - not!

I too don't think it was in the right category but who cares. I loved it!!

I liked this one alot....

At 19 she may be more of a woman than someone twice her age.