All Comments on 'Kimberly and a Neighbor'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Who is "Beverley" and who is "Robert" Kimberley seems to be married to two people. "Robert" and "Ronald" and her alter ego seems to be "Beverly". Very confusing. also as this story is about her fucking her son why isn't it the Incest/Taboo section?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
had potential....BUT....

way, way, too many typos, spelling errors, change of tenses, change of names, etc. WTF-did you read it first?

Also needs to be in incest/taboo.

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