All Comments on 'Kindled in Fiction'

long and the realization scene was a bit under done.

Great Story please continue

A fine story and worthy of a followup.

Please write a follow up, very enjoyable.

perhaps a prequel to tell about what happened previously, and a sequel to carry it out further

You outdid yourself on this one.

Developed very nicely but the story of their lives going forward needs to be written.

You definitely need to continue this story line. Don't mean to tell you what to write, but would really enjoy several more chapters to read.

Hi Les;

I got your name when i first read it... 'course it's only because i was an electrician for 200 yrs.

I'd love to read more of these two. I'll go now to read your other stories!!! Thanks.

Ralph

Just loved this story. It was really good, you did a good job keep it up.I hope there is more for these two and I can't wait to read it.

that story is great it definately needs a continuation.

I could see what was going to happen from early on, but that was a good thing as it made the eventual event so much better. MORE!!

I am hoping you will continue on with this story and maybe they can have a little more like her getting pregnant. Very good story so far.

Thanks for a new chapter in the writing style you have chosen. Your ability to create the subtle visulation that form your story are magnificent..

I really enjoyed this story and I hope that you will write a continuation of it! (Lose the pill) ;-)

Great Story!!!

i loved this please do a continuation email me the link when its done please email me at crazetazz53@yahoo.com

Seductive and Soft and Sexy!

I could tell where you were going, and that made the anticipation taste oh so sweet!

...write more of this wonderful love story. I cannot read enough of brother-sister LOVE stories, especially those that end well. Hoping to see more. Jim

I love the way you write. i would love to see her get off the pill though. i dont know why but for some reason brother and sister gets me really horny.

This story was amazing to read. I could see where the story was going, but unlike other stories, your's had an intensity of writing that made it impossible to stop reading. Keep up the good work!

Matt

awesome story

the story was great but come on a johnny carson, intellivision, and monty python reference, he is supposed to be 19. And im assuming since wifi and laptops are mentioned it takes place in a fairly recent time and no 19 year old would have remembered johnny carson or played with intellivision. The holy grail reference can slide because thats a classic.

Going to have to agree with the previous commenter. Although any kid who didn't get the opportunity to play a still functioning Intellivision his parents had is missing out *laugh* My parents still play Burgertime on a regular basis. How those bloody controllers still work is a mystery.

No real way to explain away Carson, though. Even tapes of it is a bit far-fetched, and I've only seen a very few short-lived shows that played old Carson-era Tonight Show for him to have stumbled across. So, point to the commenter.

And Python is indeed timeless.

Loved the story One of the best i"ve read. KEEP up the excellent writing!!!!!

your mention of a continuation made my ears perk up, please go for it lol

Dude that was really good

Great writing, titillating/erotic/stimulating without what the... "my giant 10" cock dumped gallons of cum in her" type of stuff that so many here use.

Please continue the story. This is too good to let end so early in their new-found love for each other.

The love and attraction to a Website internet writer's inestual love story of a fictional brother's and sister's carnal incestual love affair has ignited Amanda her fantasy desires within her to wishing the story were real her in life. Of course, she does not know until sometime later the writer/author of the taboo tale that lights her sexual fires is written by none other than her brother!!

Overall the story of Nick and Amanda seems destined to be an incestual, historical epic rendition of true, pure, and carnal consummation of their eternal love!! Their mostly uncharacteristic and carnal love has been, since their very young years of growing up with and in their parents home, brewing slowly just under the surface in the deepest recesses of their souls and minds, and was destined to come to full fruition in their adolescent years.

Nick's age was disclosed as nineteen years old; there was no mention, nor any historical comparison, such as x number of years older or younger than Nick, or years since Amanda graduated high school, etc. She had lived with or in her ex-husband's residence for twenty-eight months, but that was the only reference to "years" in or of her life!

There is a Chapter 02 waiting for my eager eyes to peruse and my spongy incestual-loving mind to absorb the pure and true carnal love of Nick and Amanda!! One prior reader's comment suggested "lose the pill"; I must agree whole-heartedly!! For truly gifted carnal, blood-related incestual couples to express their most deepest, earth-shattering and eternal love, the pregnancy (when physically possible) and birth of a child, or children, is the utmost, ultimate expression of their faith and their consummatted love.

I agree about a 19 yr old knowing about Johnny Carson and Monty Python, then laptops, cell-phones, and WIFI; doesn't work

8~) funny thing is; I think that he knew before she did; due to screenname.

DKP

Separately; BigDaddyG; stop telling everyone the story in comments; some come here before reading the story - I continually see you critiquing while giving everything away.

Now on to the next chapter

just as far as u can more please

finally someone who knows what sibling love is and keeps it between them and not everyone else. THANK YOU

Judging by the comments I am a little late finding this story. Still, I found it to be well written during the build up to what we all saw coming with a beautiful ending. I enjoyed it very much

Wow, some great stories.