All Comments on 'Kinetic: The First Alliance Ch. 02 Pt. 01'

I was excited to see a second page until I saw it was only one sentence long.

I am enjoying this tale. It has action and interesting characters. Not much erotica yet but you may be building to it.

I do wish you held off publishing until you had complete chapters. But since I do not know how the posting/editing process is being done, that may not be feasible for you. I would rather wait for bigger chunks than have the flow interrupted so often