All Comments on 'King Family Values Ch. 02'

But as others have said, "Way too short!"

Lots of lovely background but no sex. Move on.

First two parts plus three more might make one chapter. Get on with it.

Too short.

B aut nice build up.

and ditto to what the others said.. don't know about this 750 word limit...but can't wait until Chapt 3 and 4 and 5?

This is my first time writing here and I just found out that there is a 750 weird minimum, not maximum as I thought. So from now on they will be much longer!

Just keep on writing - well done so far !!

will this be a long drawn out story?you need to make these chapters a lot longer,I don't think I'll live to see the end at this rate.It has already put me off reading any more of this series.