All Comments on 'Kirsty Ties Herself Up'

Or is it yaag?

I enjoy bondage and relinquishing control to the Dominant I serve, so I found this story very interesting and exciting. Unfortunately, the large number of grammatical and spelling errors dimmed my enjoyment. Please keep writing, but get an editor to proofread and clean up your text before posting it in future.

I like the plot, but it could use a little editing as far as grammar and spelling.