All Comments on 'Kismet Ch. 03'

At first I thought you provided a rescue a bit too soon. I love the power games being played!

I am very intrigued with this tale and more so now that you have introduced the beginning personality of our heroine's "Dad". ;) A well written chapter. Thank you for coming on board. I look forward to more of your work gracing the title of Kismet. ~ RedHairedandFriendly

Love the power games being played, and all the twists and turns this is taking. Very much looking forward to the fourth chapter.

You have made the characters come alive and given them flesh and bones....love her father...though I was hoping he would help her...but considering the time and place, he is perfect...I can't wait until Afsoon gets her revenge...