by August_Bouvier
There was not enough length to the story, it needs be longer. What happened afterwords?
I absolutely love how she has his number before she has his number!
Very clever and well done!
Oh this is a cute story... I am loving how it is being shaped together - a bit of past, a bit of present and a lot of intrigue :)
Thank you for posting.
Superb! Excelente! Brava! What a beautiful piece of work, and there are more chapters for me to gorge myself with. I've only read 1 chapter and already I'm loving your writing. Your characters are spot-on, and very likeable. I thought that Nicole was going to be the heroine but you flipped the scene, making it a not so typical meeting.
This was SUCH a great story! I've read it in its entirety more than once--it was just so addictive! I hope you write more soon!!!!! I wish everyone's stories on here were this satisfying to dive into and get lost in while trying to avoid reality every once in awhile. And mentioning the song Ride was a bonus, too! I saw what you meant as soon as I listened to it.
August, don't stop. This is wonderful You have a gift for dialog and description. I felt like I was in the bookstore. This has the promise of a great read. More, More, More!
August, don't stop. This is wonderful You have a gift for dialog and description. I felt like I was in the bookstore. This has the promise of a great read. More, More, More!
I'm hooked! Unexpected begininning, deliberately misleading the readers- wonderful! I'm looking forward to more!