by RedBarnErotica
You never mentioned where or when he took his own clothes off. That makes the scene more difficult to visualize.
not really believable for a first time...to much extra for a first time...it would either be more forceful or gentle and more time and detail.
they are great, but I wish they were longer. would love to see more of Thad and paige! That was hot!
great first story..i would love to read anything else you may write..you could even expand this one..please do write more.